The Velds Steal a Bike edited

I wanted to do a quick comic of a few Veldie rogues and Kelthe stealing a bike... It will not end well for Kelthe.

(Edit-- Made requested changes.)

I went vector, since it's my fastest medium and it looks nice for comics, but I spent waaaay too much time on Murder Row (which is now mostly covered by a bunch of people), and I didn't get it finished. The spacing is weird because I took out the text bubble, so there's a big space where it should be.

I also can't remember exactly what everyone looks like in this frame, and while I was originally just going to say, "this is how I imagine your character, whether or not it's totally accurate," ah... well, I'm not even sure I got some of the haircolors right. I do want them to be recognizable, even if they aren't totally correct!

So, from left to right, we have Lila, Wildia (on the stolen bike), Kelthe, and Cel. I'm pretty sure Cel doesn't wear bra-shirts, but you are not going to convince me to cover that up and deny myself the opportunity to a draw rotty, undead organ-bag of a belly. X3 Oh, and no one gets tabards. Because four people in the same tabard looks dumb in a comic and is boring to draw.

Lila I put in the T1 rogue stuff, because that's the only thing I specifically remember that she has. :> And it's neat. I think I got all her piercings, but lemme know. I think you have the same haircut as Wil now, too, but for the sake of variety, I put the old long one on.

Wil... I know her haircut, and I think she's kinda scarred, but I cannot remember a damn thing other than that. And... she smokes? If not I can toss the cig onto Lila, but I liked it in the open mouth, haha. Need to play with the bike handle so it doesn't look like it's coming out of her wrist, too... Curse you rogues and your bikes! It's hard to work with so much overlapping black! XD

Kelthe is Kelthe, I better get him right. (edit: Forgot his suspenders. @_@)

And Cel... Hhhhair? She has some. I think it's the soaked cut, but who knows? And maybe it's purple? Maybe you have eyes and not sockets? And the clothes came completely out of my ass, but they are roguey.

But yeah, just let me know if there's anything to fix to make it more recognizable for you.